Reflection #5 to Jordan

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/12/wrapping-up.html?showComment=1386249587090#c5750257321408340853

reflection #4 to Jordan Hadani

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/last-weeks-backlog.html?showComment=1385865765297#c7508879248345790980

Revising my draft

i been revising my draft to make it better because i had small mistakes. i send it to my friend dihanna to check some  of my errors and sometime next week i am going to the writing center because by the end of next week i want to send my new draft to the professor. i realize i had the same mistakes over and over again grammar, forgetting comas but i just have to proof read out loud.

Reflection #3 to Jordan Hadani

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/revising-and-editing.html?showComment=1385347386100#c511203649597360985

reflection #2 TO JORDAN blog

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/writing-paper.html?showComment=1384742583882#c4970944785782219285

my research draft

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCZ0JRVkpmMmdJUXM/edit?usp=sharing

when writing a research draft you have to be very focus and you have to read all your sources since all you sources needs to be in your paper. When writing my paper it was a little difficult do to the length we needed to hand in. my paper was 8 length i had good sources but i was still a little confused. The one thing that happen to me good was my boss wife who gave me a lot of information. overall i think i did good just hoping my essay covered everything in it.

Reflection of Jodan Blog

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/10/reflection-on-outline-assignment.html