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Saturday, November 30, 2013
Sunday, November 24, 2013
Revising my draft
i been revising my draft to make it better because i had small mistakes. i send it to my friend dihanna to check some of my errors and sometime next week i am going to the writing center because by the end of next week i want to send my new draft to the professor. i realize i had the same mistakes over and over again grammar, forgetting comas but i just have to proof read out loud.
Reflection #3 to Jordan Hadani
http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/revising-and-editing.html?showComment=1385347386100#c511203649597360985
Sunday, November 17, 2013
reflection #2 TO JORDAN blog
http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/writing-paper.html?showComment=1384742583882#c4970944785782219285
Friday, November 15, 2013
my research draft
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCZ0JRVkpmMmdJUXM/edit?usp=sharing
when writing a research draft you have to be very focus and you have to read all your sources since all you sources needs to be in your paper. When writing my paper it was a little difficult do to the length we needed to hand in. my paper was 8 length i had good sources but i was still a little confused. The one thing that happen to me good was my boss wife who gave me a lot of information. overall i think i did good just hoping my essay covered everything in it.
when writing a research draft you have to be very focus and you have to read all your sources since all you sources needs to be in your paper. When writing my paper it was a little difficult do to the length we needed to hand in. my paper was 8 length i had good sources but i was still a little confused. The one thing that happen to me good was my boss wife who gave me a lot of information. overall i think i did good just hoping my essay covered everything in it.
Tuesday, November 12, 2013
Reflection of Jodan Blog
http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/10/reflection-on-outline-assignment.html
Tuesday, November 5, 2013
essay outline
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCNGpCRVV3U184RTg/edit?usp=sharing
In my outline I showed the steps to my essay. I showed that for my first two pages I am going say the history of the war. After that I am going to write about how during 1995 the Gaza Strip and West Bank was started and how the Palestinians didn't want to be separated. I am also going to write the wall that was built by Israel to separate them from Palestine. The conclusion will be on my opinion on what the united nation and U. S should do about this problem.
In my outline I showed the steps to my essay. I showed that for my first two pages I am going say the history of the war. After that I am going to write about how during 1995 the Gaza Strip and West Bank was started and how the Palestinians didn't want to be separated. I am also going to write the wall that was built by Israel to separate them from Palestine. The conclusion will be on my opinion on what the united nation and U. S should do about this problem.
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