Reflection #5 to Jordan

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/12/wrapping-up.html?showComment=1386249587090#c5750257321408340853

reflection #4 to Jordan Hadani

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/last-weeks-backlog.html?showComment=1385865765297#c7508879248345790980

Revising my draft

i been revising my draft to make it better because i had small mistakes. i send it to my friend dihanna to check some  of my errors and sometime next week i am going to the writing center because by the end of next week i want to send my new draft to the professor. i realize i had the same mistakes over and over again grammar, forgetting comas but i just have to proof read out loud.

Reflection #3 to Jordan Hadani

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/revising-and-editing.html?showComment=1385347386100#c511203649597360985

reflection #2 TO JORDAN blog

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/11/writing-paper.html?showComment=1384742583882#c4970944785782219285

my research draft

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCZ0JRVkpmMmdJUXM/edit?usp=sharing

when writing a research draft you have to be very focus and you have to read all your sources since all you sources needs to be in your paper. When writing my paper it was a little difficult do to the length we needed to hand in. my paper was 8 length i had good sources but i was still a little confused. The one thing that happen to me good was my boss wife who gave me a lot of information. overall i think i did good just hoping my essay covered everything in it.

Reflection of Jodan Blog

http://jordanhadani.blogspot.com/2013/10/reflection-on-outline-assignment.html

essay outline

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCNGpCRVV3U184RTg/edit?usp=sharing

In my outline I showed the steps to my essay. I showed that for my first two pages I am going say the history of the war. After that I am going to write about how during 1995 the Gaza Strip and West Bank was started and how the Palestinians  didn't want to be separated. I am also going to write the wall that was built by Israel to separate them from Palestine. The conclusion will be on my opinion on what the united nation and U. S should do about this problem.

quotation paragraphs

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCeFRBb0ZHNFNUdkU/edit?usp=sharing

I found some very important quotes due to my topic. All the quotes i use showed a strong feeling that the person had. For example with Arafat (the leader of palestine) saying how he felt what Rabin (leader of israel)  was saying that palestine was in charge of the bombing so the meeting between them can be sabotage. This shows how far he think israel can go. Writing the Quotation paragraphs help me see how some quotes are very important and you can use them to explain a important situation.

Annotated bibioliography

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCeWVIeGtiTzN1UjQ/edit?usp=sharing

I  learn a lot of new things writing this paper i learn how Arafat leader of Palestine wanted  Israel troops out of west bank.I also learn how Israel agree only if Palestine took down their militias. They been having a lot of obstacles but when Arafat had his baby Rabin leader of Israel congratulated him things might off cool  of due to the baby but they still were having conflict. I also learn how some people blame U.S for not doing nothing. They felt that since U.S have a relationship with Israel they could had convince Israel to stop doing what they were doing.

my feedback on my annotated bibliography sources

I found a article on a guy name James Petras who feels very strong about Israel an talks about another guy name Jose Saranmago. They feel that Israeli are very awful people and what they are doing to Palestine is a crime. Jose Saranmago compared Israel and Palestine war to  the holocaust which got Israel very upset. They compared them because the Palestinian suffer, they had refugee camps and was starved just like the Nazis.I agree with it to some point but i feel that we still have time in the future will see how his conflict ends up. 

research

i spoke to my history teacher from high school and he explain a lot about the war between Israel and Palestinian. He told me in a way that i can understand better how the jew use to live in Palestinian a long time ago and when the whole holocaust happen they went back over there but arabs were already living there. they came and Britain made it to israel were they took over 80 percent of palestine. then on 1995 they finally sat down (israel and Palestinian) to talk about a agreement. However before this israel keep denying the peace between them. 

research proposal

My research proposal focuses on how the Israel and Palestine war. In my research proposal i say the steps of me writing my essay such as what i am going to say like whats been going on since 1995 and the brief history of the war. i will be talking about all the new agreement that Palestinian dont agree with. Also how the gaza in one part of palestinian and the other is west bank and how separated they are. Also what can be a new idea for the israel and Palestinian that salsify both of them.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B8bQn1tHZmMCMWgxWTVONkdnSjg/edit?usp=sharing

research paper

i found a lot of new information about the war between the israel and Palestinian on the web called in Americans knew. It said by the end of the war israel conquered 78 percent of Palestine's that really crazy how the israel just want to be taking over. Also how much they been separating themselves from palestinian by building a wall. They also made refugee camps for them. They been hurting the Palestinian and been denying peace between them 

reseach paper

I haven't started my research but I figure out what topic I wanted to do number 5 about the conflict between Israel and the Palestinian because I can use my boss as a resource because he is  from Palestinian so it will help me.  i can also ask my history teacher for help he knows a lot about that. Also i find that topic interesting because of all the damages israel did to palestinian. however i am confuse about what happen on 1995?