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In my outline I showed the steps to my essay. I showed that for my first two pages I am going say the history of the war. After that I am going to write about how during 1995 the Gaza Strip and West Bank was started and how the Palestinians didn't want to be separated. I am also going to write the wall that was built by Israel to separate them from Palestine. The conclusion will be on my opinion on what the united nation and U. S should do about this problem.
In my outline I showed the steps to my essay. I showed that for my first two pages I am going say the history of the war. After that I am going to write about how during 1995 the Gaza Strip and West Bank was started and how the Palestinians didn't want to be separated. I am also going to write the wall that was built by Israel to separate them from Palestine. The conclusion will be on my opinion on what the united nation and U. S should do about this problem.
Hi Diana,
ReplyDeleteWe are not in the same section, but are writing about the same topic. I like your reference to the wall separating Israel from Palestine. One thing which is important to mention is whether that separation contributes to the resolution of the conflict or whether it is a hindrance to it.
I like your fake on the topic best of luck!
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